Structure in a story

Structure in a story is a theme right now in my life. James has been teaching me how to make a story tighter and how to bring out the main plot even when there might be several smaller side stories going on. His wisdom in this has been sooo valuable. What is structure and what makes a plot work? When we are writing, we often say things like working with an outline will hinder my creativity. I myself can't work off an outline. However, I have learned that putting one together when your finished will give a clearer look at what has been created and helps in the editing process. I myself am working on one with I AM WOLF, if for no other reason than so make sure James and I are on the same page. (no pun intended...well maybe...) He will be receiving this today. It is something I have just learned....

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Chaos and the Beltane Chapter 2

Jack, the only name he is known by in Beltane went by many names across the Four Corners. Secret names. He sat in the back corner of the tavern watching the door, never once taking his eyes off it. He had been sent by the Priory to find a kid and wasn’t told what he looked like. All he was given was a name…Nicolai. Still he was sure if he waited around the Tavern long enough he would find someone who was familiar with the name. ‘If you ever want to know something about some one, go to the tavern.’ He always said when he was given such an assignment. He never paid attention to the person who assigned his tasks, only the coin in the purse. He didn’t mind it either. He enjoyed being able to travel from place to place and making those who hired him, pay for what he wanted and needed. A request...

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Choas and the Beltane

I'm writing again...this time it isn't about wolves. Although I have been working on a sequel to I AM WOLF. I can't share that though because it will give too much away about the novel and I don't want to do that. So...here is a fantasy I'm working on. Along with an off the wall romance that will follow. Chaos and the Beltane When the time of Beltane plays At midnight hour it is the power Unto a ritual it is for told. Seek hallowed ground From dirt that’s old. To hide from sins and thoughts that dwell Let all the ghosts sleep from this spell. Now the Seeker can not glean All the trouble that follows thee. There is magic in the air tonight. A wave of song and mystic light. The Seekers Prayer Chapter 1 “Strawberries, I want strawberries,” she said. Her big blue eyes were so...

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It's the middle of the night

Today, I felt sick most of the day. It's just a small cold but it made me sleep a lot this afternoon. So now, I can't seem to sleep at all. I keep tossing and turning, waiting for the final analysis of I AM WOLF. The truth is, it can always go either way. There are so many talented writers out there with so much to share and say. It makes me wonder how my small voice is going to be heard among the millions that are working to achieve the same as me. I'm very proud of the story I have written and very humbled by the awesome response it has received, especially since it isn't with a publisher yet. What a great thing it is to create something from nothing, no more than just mere words on a page. There is no greater joy than that accept for my family. What would I do if this doesn't go right...

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What my editor said!!

James Weil "I need a few days off to finish Joann's manuscript. I promise you guys are going to love this story. I Am Wolf is captivating, and Joann's writing is so filled with passion you will be swept off your feet. What talent this woman has!" I'm completely blown away by this. He has been a real friend and a real support. Now he is editing my novel and loves it!! What a compliment that is!! I can't wait to see what happens next on this journey...smiles...

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